Sunday, May 20, 2012

Comparison Poems


A Dream Within A Dream by Edgar Allan Poe


Take this kiss upon the brow!
And, in parting from you now,
Thus much let me avow--
You are not wrong, who deem
That my days have been a dream;
Yet if hope has flown away
In a night, or in a day,
In a vision, or in none,
Is it therefore the less gone?
All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream.

I stand amid the roar
Of a surf-tormented shore,
And I hold within my hand
Grains of the golden sand--
How few! yet how they creep
Through my fingers to the deep,
While I weep--while I weep!
O God! can I not grasp
Them with a tighter clasp?
O God! can I not save
One from the pitiless wave?
Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream?



A Plane within a Plane by this something or other writer

Fasten your belts and pop your ears!
It's time to release travel hardened fears,
They kick in with takeoff--
Reality gone, a blur from speed
Till I am too high for weed
To fear my death from the fall;
My emotions vibrate, they call
My heart with tremors I feel,
This new heat within me is revealed,
I have to shake my personal bane
To cool off within the plane.

I see a new try
Clouds blanket my clean sky
A canvas of uncolored color,
A site quite duller--
No builds and no scrapes,
Only vast beautiful blue drapes,
Soothe the vigilant emotion that rapes!
I lose my balmy touch,
My cheeks unclench from their clutch!
Much as the sky's complexion,
Fear becomes a reflection,
I see myself, just me, plain
I'm flying within a plane.


Puppy


Her fireman's fur too long for Cruella,
Too wired unlike a baked Calie,
She bordered me like Babe,
Her fur shed like a mist on my legs
I felt home with her at my side.

I felt home beside salt and pepper dotted fur,
Her black head cut white between brown eyes,
It ran like a shadow behind her ears,
My hands covered it as Abe's hand and his chair,
justified to claim myself home.

Her tail curled wherever she stepped
Wagging with power to knock on a door
Bouncing with youth fifteen years old
Once her tongue stopped I knew I was home.

ReFuse




A seed of light crushed
voice slit at the root
His bulb of growth,
the sign of maturity, cut
A voiceless action within
Shattered his speech
Swallowed shards of light
Consumed foreign energy
Fuse blown and bloody
Words drained into his lungs
Mute.